Fake Smiles, And Pretend Laughs.

Whoa,,wtf its so sad

"She walks alone,head down
Counting her footsteps on the floor
Looking for her next class
She's early, so she waits by the door"

this part really pictured on ma mind, like whenever i see her in personal itll make me stand up and go to her and join her to walk,,
nice

"The door opens, slowly but surely
And she goes to her usual seat
Head still down, mouth still shut
She doesn't dare to speak."

i like this,coz this things really happend on me,,i really hate the feeling of that,,

"No one knows how I feel,
No one truly even knows
How long my life has been like this
How far am I willing to go?"

this part really makes me sad
it feels like its hapenning on me,,
like its me on that situation,,

She whispers silently to herself
As tears roll down her cheeks
"What did I do to deserve this life?
Why God, does this has to be me?"

and this is my favorate part,,
it seem so powerful for me,
it makes me feel hate the world and everything on it,

nice piece,i love it!
keep it up!
5/5

Now this is a poem I can relate to. it's so saddening. I once felt like this and whilst I'm reading this poem as a reader I'm picturing myself as the girl for some reason. For I was once in that situation. Alone, not wanted. As soon as I read the first stanza something inside me clicked and realization sinked in and I thought to myself "God, this sounds like me...."

Keep up the work once again :)
mwah xxxx
Mucho Love
Roxy xxxx

Thanks for describing my life at school.

This is a excellent poem nice job

I absolutely love everything about this poem! 5/5