Connections

by Shinobi   Aug 26, 2008


Starts or beginnings are hardest to create
First impressions fled through ones mind
Rather loving someone, or should you hate
Sometimes those feeling are combined

At first kiss, hug and smile away
Expressions of the future in ones heart
Contributing to them regularly will sway
The relationship will be determined as a good start

Starting as simple admiration from distance
Grows the aspiration for a mutual fate
If a bond should be created without resistance
Ignorance or guidance would determine the state

Commencing one connection out of others alike
With the one I'd like to get together more and more
Before swiftly making the first strike
Deeply searching for what my future has in store

It's your decision, now you must choose
Will your decision push me astray?
In starting a connection there's nothing to lose
If you decline an offer, you may regret someday

Deciding your future, calculating your next action
Starting a connection while cutting loose from another
Should you make it reality, or should it stay as fiction?
Your decision to choose, your mind to bother

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  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Amazing job! im speechless! :) 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good very descriptive of what goes on in some peoples mind when they think of starting a relationship with someone 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Melanie

    Wow! Great insights, i loved it =)

  • 15 years ago

    by CourtneyyContageous

    I've onlt seen a few problems within you poem. the first may not be a mistake, but maye just a confusion for me. "Starts or new beginnings" It threw me off. But the second time around it read nicely. Maybe think of revising the first line? But only just a little. The second issue I had you put a comma after "At first," I think it would sound alot better if you put the comma after kiss. The rest of this poem was written very good, the flow was constant. Other than the few problems I had with it, it was a joy to read. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by The Queen

    I absolutely loved the rhythm of this piece although there was one line that made it a bit off.
    ”Deeply searching for what my future has in store” (I think this line was less appealing unlike the rest. It was just my opinion) Otherwise, This piece was extremely awe-inspiring. Every line has something to do with me. As I went trough the end I was like evaluating things about me or people around me. Words used were simple yet they had great impact to the readers mind, it was because you have that talent in you how to combine the right words that best describe whats in your mind and how you want it to be. Very inspiring and extremely captivating. Good Job..

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