Broken

by maryann   Aug 31, 2008


What do you do
When your day turns into the darkest night
When hearing his name makes
You want to crawl up in a corner and die
When the memory of him
Tears you apart
Haunted by everything
The scent of his perfume
The touch of his hand
The feel of his lips upon yours
The life that you ones had
You forget how to smile&laugh
You just want to be alone
In the dark
Not being able to see the scars
Hes left behind
You want to hate him
But yet you love him dearly
Looking into the mirror seeing
Nothing but clouds
Black clouds hovering over you
With sadness in your eys
Such a beautiful girl
But then again beautiful means nothing
When your torn apart
Broken heart and shattered dreams
left with nothing but
SCARS

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  • 15 years ago

    by maryann

    Yeah i didnt relize that untill amber mentioned it i will try to remember next time i write something thanx all ur advice appreciated=]

  • 15 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Lacking of punctuations make it less interesting! it's okay but can't say good. very emotional write but you could have made it more poetic.

  • 15 years ago

    by Mishka

    WOW this is so so gloomy and devastating... and i love how you say that even with beauty you can never be happy without the one you really love. sweetheart... but let me tell you something... this was not meant to be. your one true soul mate is still out there, i promise you this. stay strong ok? this one broke your heart, and for a reason... that reason is that someone out there is still waiting for you. :)

    Amazing job I really enjoyed it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Amber

    HMmm well if I may say this was alright.
    I think some sugeestions to make it better puncuation. Like when you have questions put a question mark.
    Maybe some rhyming. Although not necessary.

    But yea it seemed alright. You got uot what you wanted to say. Maybs more desciptions are needed tho.

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