Cute poem. being in love is such a wonderful thing, but when it ends it's the worst pain God created... keep it up! =)

Very good poem. I really enjoyed reading this... The flow was good and it was touching. To be honest it inspired me... I've been going through some trouble with the girl I'm in love with and the part about "Look in my eyes and you'll see how I feel" I totally forgot about that. That's one thing me and her share...

I can relate to the love and emotion once again in this piece, it reminds me very much of my fiancee and I. Excellent job describing your love and emotion in this poem....Great job again 5/5 GG23

In this poem I acucally like your use of emotions. usually love poems are mushy or go to far in depth but here you have balanced the scale perfectly. The use of rhyme is good as well as the flow.

My favorite lines in this poem are:
Within seconds,
You'll see me surrender...

The image is so strong there I can relate very well to what you have written. Once again i like what you have done with the punctuation.
Well Written

Another great poem. I think the flow could have been better if maybe you worked on the syllables or something. But, like the person above me said, it has a ton of emotion. Good job

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Lol..i also think it is very sweet :)
I believe that the flow is not the best..
but that doesn't really matter if the
intention of the poem is like this one..:)
good job!!

Oh the emotion (: This is exactly what I feel when I'm with my one and only.. I love it!

Sweet poem. I advise you on re-working the last stanza. The sudden lengthiness of those lines disrupts the flow and the pattern you've used for 3 stanzas, but everything else is okay.
Keep writing!