Luminescent Night-Light (haiku)

by Melissa   Sep 10, 2008


Bright stars hang themselves
upon midnight's scenery
with such brilliant ease

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  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    For some reason I pictured a star hanging from a noose when I read this, and that actually made me enjoy this poem more.
    It has the potential to be taken in darker undertones, which gives it depth.
    Well done and keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Good haiku, great imagery that appears in my mind when I read this. Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 17 years ago

    by charles

    Very nice! Simple, but I do like it a lot!

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