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by Faithless   Sep 19, 2008


From the time that I get to know you
to the times that we've been through
time has gone so fast
The memories that we had between us
will now be stored in the past

The late night chats
to the conversation we had
I just wanna tell you that I'm glad
to have met
the person whose responsible
for the poetries in my notepad

Though there are certain boundaries
I'm glad that we've explored the deep dark alley
Our life is now full with stories
some are sad and some are funny
we've filtered crushes to the one and only

We only live once
one shot and one chance
to take this love trance
and advance

But then again
for some, they're afraid
that it's not going to be the same
reality has got them chain
They're afraid of changing lanes

They travel the same road
carrying the same load
not knowing that it is better to go by boat
they keep on going
their plans for their future
in which they have already wrote
forgetting that it can always be erase and be rewrote

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  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    This sounds so personal, maybe an experience you have actually had. I love the emotional feel of taking the chance, sharing the unshared with that certain someone.
    Definitely from the heart in my opinion
    Super
    Connie

  • 15 years ago

    by Katie

    "We only live once
    one shot and one chance
    to take this love trance
    and advance"
    ^I like that stanza. I think it stands out well, and has great flow.

    Do you mean to have this poem untitled? Because I think it would be great with one. Awesome job, and thanks for the comment. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow, this was great. particularly the ending i really loved.
    But then again
    for some, they're afraid
    that it's not going to be the same
    reality has got them chain
    They're afraid of changing lanes
    ^^ so much truth in your words.. You wrote about it very uniquely and it was fantastic.

    They travel the same road
    carrying the same load
    not knowing that it is better to go by boat
    they keep on going
    their plans for their future
    in which they have already wrote
    forgetting that it can always be erase and be rewrote
    ^^ this is.. amazing. i dont even know how to describe it.. the truth in this.. is crazy.. its brilliantly written.
    Many people live their lives in fear of what may happen... so well written.

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    A wonderful Poem, Your words mean s much, very touching, A Beautiful poem
    5/5 from me.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all...that was a quote we had to work on a little while ago. I think it is very true and we should be glad for the beautiful moments we had with our beloved ones, don't you?
    Much beautiful poem, Azzza!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

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