Darkness

What could i say ...its just so fantastic..that words are not enough to describe how i felt when i read your poem..

On this chair, in darkness, it's all so clear.
In this darkness, on this chair, I am king

Imagination roams as a lion in a jungle
The soul is free, peace dissolves anger

In silence, thoughts are crisp and loud
Here, there is no limit or even a border.

I sit alone in what is called a living room
this is my kingdom of concentration

No need for visuals and useless distraction
I sit and ponder world's perfect insanity

The television screen is as black as night
In darkness, imagination can be clever
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A little too late, but congrats anyways. The first time I read this poem, it sort of blew me away. The way you captured silence and reverie is just awesome. I loved every first and last line of each stanza. I do love how you pen down your thoughts so vividly. And
the last stanza was the cherry on top! A peaceful world to be in where good and bad just exists. Wonderful poem.

This piece took me on away I actually imagine
myself in my favorite chain living your thoughts
like a small child reading a classic tale like tom sawyer It was amazing that a poem could
actually give me such a experience. every
word carefully chosen to take me to my relaxing
place all that was missing was maybe a Kenny
G song in the background lol excellent poem
my friend you are without a doubt a true poet
this will def. be under my fav poems list and i hope
to read and go through the same experience each time I READ it thank you for sharing
this most excellent piece cy

Wow an amazing write indeed. a very detailed poem. and the title was perfect, it fit well with the poem. this poem was quite interesting, it's different from anything else i've read in awhile. very creative piece, keep writing! 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Congrats on your win...a very deserving poem.
Take Care
Cindy