Your Words

A very sad emotional poem with a nice possitive ending, a good message there for many of the youngsters on this site well written and well done

If i may be so bold as to make a suggestion,
even though your poems flow was good the meter is slightly off and easily improved

Why did I stay for all those years
Was in love, put away my fears
Cruel and vicious, I am confused
Awful words, left me bruised

Look at the last line,i'm not trying to be critical,I just thought it would make a lovely poem even nicer

Grant

What a very sad piece. Full of raw emotion.

Memories painful, my soul is aching
Words hurled and spewed, my heart breaking
Daggers piercing my heart and soul
Will the wounds heal and close the hole

Sometimes things said out of anger hurt worse then if someone slapped you in the face. They remain in your mind.

Defeated me, soul eroded, left me stunned
No more, now free from what was done
Putting pieces together, once again
Battles to fight, victories to obtain

I loved the ending. Hope shining through the darkness :)
Great job!
Take Care
Cindy