Looking Within

by Andy   Sep 28, 2008


Standing in front of you
Seeing you in so much pain
The guilt, the hurt, the sorrow
So much effort, and yet so little gain.
The many years of unhappiness
Has slowly worn away your grin
The expressionless look on your face
Should almost be a sin
These times of depression
Are getting harder and harder to bare.
I'm asking you all these questions
And all you do it stare
I look into your eyes
To see your true complexion
I suddenly start to realize
I'm staring at my own reflection.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wow, very powerful ending and your words created such a sad scene in my mind. Nice job though, your descriptions were great and made me feel what you were feeling. Take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...

  • 17 years ago

    by Splashley

    I absolutly love it, it is very well written...voted you 5/5. (:
    <333
    ashley ♥

  • 17 years ago

    by Andy

    Thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Wow. what a twist. i love it. awesome job. this was well written.
    --aprilsconspiracy

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