Midnight Kiss

by Maddy   Sep 30, 2008


Deep in the middle of the night,
a parent wakes, with a slight fright.
A twinge of unease nags their mind,
the thought of their child, not far behind.

Unable to put their mind to rest,
they stumble out of bed on only one quest.
Opening the door oh so slow,
to their child's protected bedroom cove.

A girl's body lies tightly wrapped,
in the covers beneath a moonlit shaft.
Sweet face, with angelic gaze,
her breathing steady, like the moon's even rays.

The parent tiptoes quietly,
and the girl's tear stains they do not see.
They lean down and kiss her cheek;
with their mind at rest, they go back to sleep.

Little do they know that during that day,
the girl had had people say
hurtful and very rude things,
leaving her in hidden pain.

And that night she cried herself to sleep;
feeling unloved and very weak.
She'd woken up to the sound of footsteps,
but had stayed laying in her bedroom depths.

She'd seen her mom's tired face,
and felt her anxious gaze.
And as her mom had kissed her cheek,
the girl felt loved, and smiled for the first time in a week.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Well arent i glad it ended how it did. i didnt want it to end sadly.. and im very happy that it didnt.
    I think you wrote about the ofteen unseen love between a mother and a daughter extremely well. I took your poem as, the mother woke because deep inside she knew that something was not right with her daughter.. which is very strong love for ya :]
    and then... it didnt matter what had happened to the girl that day, the love of her mother set everything straight and she remembered how loved she actually was..
    beautiful :]
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I agree with both TJ and Miss Take. You write with a wisdom that betrays your age. Such powerful meanings in your verses that it makes it difficult to believe you are so very young. Good work and don't ever stop writing. 5/5