FREE
by TITA Sep 30, 2008
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FREE U THOUGH THAT U CAN PLAY WITH ME FOR FREE WITH NO ONE KNOWING BUT U AND ME U THOUGHT THAT I AM JUST UR TOY U CAN MISS AROUND WITH ANY TIME U R WRONG CAUSE I DID MY PART I REPORT U I AM FREE FREE TO LIVE MY LIFE IT IS MY LIFE AGAIN NOT UR I AM NOT THE ONE SITTING IN THAT CELL WAITING DAY BY DAY TO SEE WHEN U R GOING TO BE FREE I AM FREE |
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16 years ago
First off, poems are not to be written in all caps. I would change that here and with any other poems, because it is against forum rules. Also, there is no punctuation at all in this poem, its just one big run on, how am I supposed to read it? Your spelling should be looked over, or use spell-check, I could not even enjoy this write.
Do a lot of work on it, I think you shouldn't posted it yet, take time to write it, to improve it, don't just post in a hurry.
