Scars
by Obscura Oct 2, 2008
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Every scar has has a story to tell when life becomes a nightmare and a living hell a story of pain and hurt when life gets too much when it gets worse and worse |
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14 years ago
by isabel
I have a feeling the poem could keep going... It somehow ends in an abrupt way...
It's true it never ends... By the time it reaches the surface, even if you seem to be able to stop, the thought of it haunts you throughout your life... because the scars in the inside aren't healed... -
14 years ago
by isabel
I have a feeling the poem could keep going... It somehow ends in an abrupt way...
It's true it never ends... By the time it reaches the surface, even if you seem to be able to stop, the thought of it haunts you throughout your life... because the scars in the inside aren't healed... -
14 years agoby Kimberley
That was really good and so so true. i can understand. sometimes it feels like your scars comsume you and control you. love this one. keep it up. 5/5 ~KM~
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15 years ago
Again another beautifully written poem...the rhyme is there..the structure i off..but it doesn't matter it doesn't the disturb the whole emotion and intensity of your words..keep it up!
You have amazing talent!
**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL* -
15 years ago
by Hollywood
I liked this cause its very true. There are days when my scars consume my feelings letting my remember my past letting this in my head. Though I love my scars only becuase I survived and I can show off to my boi mother when I or if I ever see her again that im still alive, and Im not afraid of her nor anyone else. Scars can be dark they can tell a horrid story of ones past but one must except the past and move one. Use the scars of a reminder of how you survied. I liked this poem it was very good. Though I do think the structure could be a little better so it could be easier to read, but thats it love it great job!
