Wake Up!

by Mister 47   Oct 3, 2008


Wake up I am not a dream in your head
Open your eyes and you will see ahead
See where you are going, you will reach the fall
I don't want you to be mad when you miss the call

I am not the Lord savior of human kind
I am as normal as any man you can find
You expect me to reach you again and again
You know I have tried not one, but ten

You should begin to accept what you feel for me
It is not anymore something you can not see
You can be mad or sad, and huff and puff
But to me your heart is simply handcuffed

Wake up, the alien has gone from your land
I will not fade away like a castle of sands
Here, Poke me see ,I am real as f___
I might look for you like a Bad luck

Waky Waky, my princess, your dream is no more
You might feel bad, and you will feel the sore
But at the end, your life will no longer leek
It is time to wake, *kiss you on your cheeks

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  • 16 years ago

    by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX

    Awww very beauitly writen u love reading ur poems it's like the word's are ment for me i wish i had a man like u in my life who is as sweet and caring and lovble like u.

  • 16 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Aww, this was verry cute and sweet. Love the flow of the poem and the wording. A really great poem

    Great Work.

  • 16 years ago

    by CalebxXxPoet With A PurposexXx

    Once again great job i really like your poems I will keep reading 5/5 Caleb Poet With A Purpose

  • 17 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow, what a great poem. It was very creative and i also like the way you kept the 'dream' happening all the way through the poem.

    You should beguine to accept what you feel for me
    ^^
    Do you mean, begin?

    But to me your heart is simply handcuffed
    ^^ i really like the concept of your heart is handcuffed.. i think that is very clever, so awesome job. Basically you are saying that they do not let their heart out to love.. but in an extremely original way.

    But at the end, you life will no longer leek
    ^^
    I think this should be 'your life will no longer leek.

    Other than that, Fantastic, great poem which really.. it was fantastic. It wasnt so straight forward, which made it very interesting to me.
    Keep up the great work.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kim

    I love this poem!
    It is so cute. ;) ^^

    No, honestly, very nice use of words and a very very creative idea.

    Great job!

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