Bolt Of Lightning {Haiku}

by BREEawNUHH   Oct 6, 2008


Lightning strikes above
in a beautiful white streak
through clouds of despair

Briana Coulter
October 6th, 2008

**Haiku is a Japanese form consisting of 3 lines with a strict syllable count of 5, 7, 5

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  • 15 years ago

    by ether

    Clouds of despair, that part seems a little random.
    Perhaps you are trying to link the lightning and clouds to each other metaphorically rather than literally but it's not showing THAT well. Still, it gives you something to think about.
    Solid poem, 5/5

    jess ~

  • 15 years ago

    by Lakota

    Very well written!!! keep up the good work!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Daniel Milano

    Pretty well done 4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Gorgeous! I loved this poem. It was beautiful. It's really interesting to look at lightning when it flashes in the dark sky. It's one of the most beautiful scenes youll ever see. I love heat lightning .. it turns a nice purple its goregous :] Lightning is really fun to watch. This poem was great because it was a haiku and what better way to describe lightning than with this poetry style. Great work Breeee. <3 5/5. (:

  • 15 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Like the imagery.

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