A love note

by Faithless   Oct 8, 2008


Days past me by
like the midnight kiss the lullaby
The dessert is dry
it's waiting for the sky to cry

I've been fading in and out of reality
My mind just wants to be in the world of the imaginary
Where we can kiss all day behind the alley
where there is always happy endings in love stories

If this was a dream
please don't wake me up
let me sleep a little longer
for only in my dream our love is stronger

But I couldn't seem to accept reality
the truth is just too scary
She's with him and not with me
dark clouds merge making my world more gloomy

All I'm left with is a love note
my last and only hope
gripping tight holding on to the rope
hoping to change the direction of our fate
with a piece of paper which i wrote

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  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Very sad, but touching, you can feel the emotion, wonderful work

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    What a sad write. This was written so well with emotions that broke my heart. What a difference this is to the poems you are writing now. I hope you are happier and these feelings long gone.

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Very interesting, sad yet touching. I like your writing styles. It merits 5/5, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Alicia

    Hi, I thought I would return the favor and leave you a comment.
    I really like this line,

    If this was a dream
    please don't wake me up
    let me sleep a little longer
    for only in my dream our love is stronger

    I can feel the anguish of your waking moments, for you to live in your dreams where you're love for this girl is returned.

    Simply amazing!

    Alicia

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