If i gave you...

by Robert Anthony   Oct 9, 2008


If i gave you my life,
would you protect it?
If i gave you my word,
would you keep it?
If i gave you my hand,
would you hold it?
If i gave you my love,
would you embrace it?
If i gave you my heart,
would you promise
not to break it?

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  • 10 years ago

    by safiya

    Wow. Its really well written. And i agree with mezmeryz. rated 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    I dont understand why on earth this poem is rated so low! i think it definitely deserves a 5/5..
    i totally love this poem, im adding it to my favorites now.. coz its one of those quote/poems that relate to everyone, the questions that eveyone would want to say at one point or the other.. something that would become a popular... if you get what i mean.. like 'roses are red etc..'
    im adding you to my favz too coz i really enjoy your style.. short but sweet. =]
    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael Verterel

    Nisely done, i agree with alex. But i know you and it's your style, so its good as is

  • 15 years ago

    by Alex

    I think its nice and simple..i like it alot!.. i think that it would sound better if u canged the love one...like if i gave you my love , would you embrace it?..or idk sumthing like that...mua mua mua!! i love it however it is anyways!

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