Remember

I agree with Jessica...
And Alex, a lil...

I've read a lot of poems, some go on for hours, line after line but rarely do i read something so full of depth. you've captured your emotions really well in this. good job, +5.

Jess

1. your poem is AWESOME WITHOUT CORRECTIONS!!!
2. F U to all those who think they need to go around corecting peoples poems that come straight from the heart..
3. 5/5!!!!

I remember those days
when we laughed so hard,
with that stupid phrase
we used for the yard.

I remember the time
you put me to bed,
with that nursery rhyme
then kissed my head.

I remember that night,
the night you left.
You guys had that huge fight
and you actually left.

I still remember, I remember-
the good and the bad.
Mom, do you remember?
Remember all the fun we had.

I think this would look even better with proper punctuation marks as written above.

A very short yet straight from the heart piece. I have the same issue with my family but a little worse than that. Few words but meant a lot and meant deeper impact in one’s life. Sometimes even words are not enough to describe what you have inside. Good Job.

This is a great poem its filled with so much emotion and the flow is great keep it up