Love, Happiness, and Sadness

I really like this poem as well. I am sure I have commented and rated quite a few of your poems in the past and I really like your style. This is a feeling that many people can compare to.

I have to admit that although I rather enjoy the poem I find the ending weak. It is a great line and goes with the poem well, but it doesnt seem finished to me...
But it is all a personal preference so it is still going to receive a 5/5 from me

Easy to relate to. I know that I do. It would have been nice if it was a little longer but it is fine the way it is. 5/5

This is cute I suppose, a bit predictable though... you wording is not the greatest you deffinatly have other pieces that are worded so much better, and the flow seemed off to me... still this is a poem that many can relate to and maybe i'm being to harsh because im really not a fan of love poems so im going to give you a 4/5

This poem for me was lacking structure and it seems as though you didn't put a lot of thought behind your poem.

I was reviewing it and the lines were very off so much so that it took away from the poem and I had to give it a less than perfect rating.

I was expecting a lot larger of a poem, I still find it was a good job. I did like it and wish that it could have been longer.

I wish I had him in my arms.
Hug him and kiss him if only for a moment.

to long for it to be in this poem..the last line was just too long and sorry to say it took away for me.

4/5

Another flawless flow in a neat romantic package