The hidden side of a man

by kelleyana   Oct 15, 2008


I've learn from the start you're going to break my heart, but the feeling that flow through my body for
you makes all words fell on deaf ears
seeing strange things happens before my eyes,
my earing all came back.
Now that it happens, believe me this feeling pierce like a dart,
My heart says you're 'the one', I thought I could have count on.
Everything were visible, yet I was so blind,
Not seeing that you could never be mine

During all my time spent in dreamland,
I dream about you, all about me and you
I've closed my eyes and recalled all the memories we had, Your smiling face, your gentle embrace,
your daily flowers even in late hours.

Tears came from my eyes because I'm afraid to tell you goodbye
Why should I be afraid in this wonderful world,
Not even imagine I'm the one would tell you farewell
Finally my eyes are opened
And things seems lots much different
Looking at you, you're physically the same, I smile
With you, then suddenly I've seen a change
I discovered your iceberg personality, one that is afraid of responsibility.

I promised I'd never be sad, because that would make
You glad.
I know you, you are that bad...
Telling you all this, look how you transmute
Now I realized that you weren't all that cute,
You are a real brute dress up in suit
Now it's time for us to take different route
now you break my heart in two, i have nothing to say to you.

Don't pretend you don't understand,
Don't give me your hand
All what happened between us were your plans
All you think about is your gland
Then be a man, I know you can
Go your way, I'll stay,
I'll never forget this day.
kelleyana junique.

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  • 15 years ago

    by january friend

    "I've learn from the start you're going to break my heart, but the feeling that flow through my body for
    you makes all words fell on deaf ears
    seeing strange things happens before my eyes,"
    -i like how you rocoginzed what can happen before you get into a relationship. i know a lot of people who go though girlfriends/boyfriends weekly and they don't understand why thier relationships don't last.

    "Now I realized that you weren't all that cute,
    You are a real brute dress up in suit
    Now it's time for us to take different route
    now you break my heart in two, i have nothing to say to you."
    -this is the part when you start to realize that maybe you made a mistake, but i like hou you said this after the previous quote^

    great poem over all, I love the message, it's not like other love poems...

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  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Wow.. This one is of ur best masterpieces! I live this poem and i'll add it to my favorite list.. Keep it up 5/5
    regards,
    Shokry

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    What a sad and melancholy poem although well written , its always so sad when love comes to an end or the realisation of that end is seen for the first time. This is the most confusing of all of the human emotions. Well done

    Grant

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    You touched my heart with this write. It does cause much pain to realize that a love, as was said above, is not what it seemed to be.

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