Darker Inside

by TB76   Oct 19, 2008


It's getting dark outside
But inside I'm darker than the night
Only I know how I miss her
How I lost the meaning for living

I'm falling inside the black
And I don't care anymore
For me everyone can die
I already lost the person I love

Everyday I keep smiling to other people
But what I really want to say is:
"**** YOU, you don' care about me"
I just want to give up and find a better place

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  • 16 years ago

    by AngelicDecadence

    "For me everyone can die"
    Into:
    "To me, everyone can die"

    Well! I liked this one a lot! It was very well written, very few grammar mistakes :) and the emotion was narrow and you could feel it flowing out of the poem. Bravo. Ugh, i can feel like that.. all the time too. It's nice to see someone feels the same once in a while.
    Keep writing.
    *Chaotic Angel*

  • 16 years ago

    by HuRtInG bEcAuSe Of YoU

    Well if you ever need to talk and vent I am here :)
    This was another great piece of work Good work :)

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