Questions With No Answers.

by Courageous Dreamer   Oct 25, 2008


The distinct image of your glowing face,
flashes quickly across my mind furthermore.
Thoughts rush over me full of happiness,
some of sorrow, others with agitation.
Impossible to erase, stitched into the heart-
remaining within my deserted soul eternally.

Questions float around my cluttered mind,
searching for well needed answers to cleanse the air.
Asking only makes everything worse, so instead-
I'll just seal my lips and not let a single word escape,
yet I'm still desperate for truthful answers that make sense.

This complicated love continues to spark questions,
tears stream down rosy cheeks reflecting my emotions.
Knees continue to become weaker, ready to collapse,
awaiting the strength to lift me up and give me hope.

Scattered words forced into my mind struggle to connect,
to form a question, that will result in a definite answer.
I am left with these unanswered cruxes
till that unknown day, when I find the answer.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    This is beautiful. I loved the imagery you've employed, and the format of your poem. You did a stupendous job. :) 5/5

    Bri~

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    .. This is very easy to relate to . Your flow is really good , and the lines flow really nicely one into the other . I have nothing bad to say , I think this is amazing . Very well done ! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Well even i am not a fan of non rhyming ones but i actualy enjoyed reading this one

    questions with no answers

    some never have answer with words!
    the most important things in life are felt with the heart and not with words
    great one tempsy!!

    feel your answers with every touch and look
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by MizzCici

    Hey i just wanted to let u kno u did a real good job u put ur emotions in it and i can feel where u were coming from,good job kep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by Empathy

    I feel this is one of your stronger pieces, and ironically it describes weakness. Someone that is facing the difficulties of love or the perception of emotions. I think that the thoughts play a very strong role in this poem and I like how you used the line "I am left with these unanswered cruxes"

    A nicely added line in my opinion, I think that it may seem small, but with some thought it means quite a bit. With the assumption of "unanswered cruxes". To me they are much like blind spots within relationships. Voids of love that reflect little interpretation. People in a relationship have to place their faith into a respectfulness that they love and trust. Regardless of their ambiguities, if the love held is indeed true then they those two people will have all that is necessary in the long run.

    Excellent work.

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