Our regret

5/5 I am really sorry for all the grammar police leaving comments, because nothing kills as fast as bad grammar you know..... lol. Keep up the good work.

This poem is depressing. Poems about cutting are not my favorite. But I still gave it a 5/5 because everything about it was great from the wording to the flow and emotion. Keep up the great work =)

Come on anger I'm ready for you
Give me everything you have got left
You have taken everything else anyway
And you will not be forgiven for your theft
For the second line , in stead of you have , try 'that you've' . It's less awkward . And for the third just replace you have with 'you've' .

Like a phoenix I will rise through are debris
Are should be our .

Again , i like the over all idea . You're a very talented writter , just try and be careful of the awkwardness .. But still 5/5 once again .

"Let me bleed the rest of my emotions
Slice open these interwoven veins
I still have something left to feel here
Even if it's only the figments of pain"

^My favorite stanza.Amazing.

In the 1st line in the 4th stanza I noticed that you have "b/c"...please edit that out and put "because".The shorthand takes away from the power of the poem.
But other than that,a fantastic job.5/5

-Amber

Interesting piece. Let me help you out with a couple typos:

^It's b/c of you I am dead on the inside
It's your fault there is nothing left for me
But you're the reason I choose to stand now
Like a phoenix I will rise through are debris ^

The b/c although not a typo, you shouldn't use text type language in a poem. It makes it look as though you haven't the time to make the piece look presentable.

^I wont let you become my current state^
won't

^Show me what you have became
What I have let you turn into
These are my words don't you here^ hear

^Through are good times and most of the bad ^ our
T

A very sadly penned portrayal of heartache.