Less then Everyone

by Shaded Sunrise   Nov 22, 2008


How come every time I see your work
I feel that smile of yours
should be a smirk

How come when I see them run
I try to catch up
but know they still won

how come when you look at me
you say I'm great
even though I know
I'm such a fake

why do I feel so left behind
when I work so hard
to find a rhyme

Compared to you I'm nothing
and nothings all I'll be
when I look in that mirror
nothing good do I see

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  • 15 years ago

    by Daz Mellow

    This is a tad (<<Omigod it's my ex's name!!!) bit depressing. But gorgeous. Don't let yourself tell yourself other wise. And if you truly think that you are less than everyone, then honey your thoughts are lying to you! This is simply beautiful though a bit sad, but everyone feels like that sometimes. Here's a bit of somethin somethin: You just write to express YOUR feelings in your own words whether they rhyme or not. This is self expression hun. Poetry comes in all shapes and sizes so don't compare one to another. =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Caitlin

    I like when i can read poems and relate back to them, 5/5

    Caitlin

  • 15 years ago

    by Sheep

    Beautiful words. I know it can be hard sometimes, but please, know that i still love you. Please keep writing, I don't know what i would do if i lost you. your beautiful, everyone thinks so. And to those people who can't see that, well, they can go |=|_|(|< themselfs. i know im not the best at the advice, but really, i do love you. dont give up.