Learning to Dance in the Rain

by kelleyana   Nov 25, 2008


Facing adversary having unrealized dream
Starting a business that you wish
Being disabled telling that you're unable
Not even thinking that you're capable

Lost the courage to go through conflict
The burden of the world fall on the head
Life can be a struggle as it can be a gift,
Even a continual battle
Success, failure, happiness all depend upon each other
Life troubles are like a storm,
It will pass and go even faster,
Once moving forward
Life is not about waiting for the flood
To be over, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

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  • 15 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    Good

  • 15 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    What a great message this piece holds, along with much truth. The rhyme and rhythm aren't the smoothest, but sometimes that doesn't matter. I try not to focus so much on the technical part of poetry when reading others work. Especially when they seem to come from the heart, as this did. 5/5 from me.

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem is beautifully written. This masterpiece reflects a theme of my favorite poet, moving in passion resting in reason

  • 15 years ago

    by Teria

    A few places are broken off at the wrong spot in the line. punctuation is off, if you take what I gave you in your most latest poem and apply it here, it's a VERY easy fix. Not nearly as bad. There are a few commas that aren't needed though.

    depends = depend.

  • 15 years ago

    by isabel

    I also have the feeling I never read a poem of yours before... so much i've been missing... :)
    This poem has a quite deep message... Sometimes you need to stand up for yourself ... because you choose your own destiny through your actions...
    I really liked this line:
    "Life can be a struggle, as it can be a gift"
    It is absolutely true...

    *awesome work*
    5/5
    isabel

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