Winter (haiku)

by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life   Dec 5, 2008


Pine trees all aglow (5)
Mountain tops covered in snow (7)
Twinkle in her eyes (5)

**please RRC. my mom helped me with this one so i think it should get some feed back as to how well we did on it**

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  • 15 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    The first 2 lines are great!!!! I loved them especially becuase they naturally ryhmed with eachother but the last line is completely random..I don't really get it...Other than that It was pretty good

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    Better than any haiku I'll ever write. I normally don't read haiku, nor do i write them. I like to tell a story.

    But I think this was pretty fruckin good, it gave a simple picture and left room for the imagination

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