My boo ( Dodoitsu)

by Ingrid   Dec 9, 2008


Warm goats milk to bath you in
Scented oils to please your skin
then love you 'neath satin sheets
My forever boo

Dodoitsu:
syllable count
7-7-7-5
consisting of humor or love

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  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    A beautiful love poem Ingrid. Short, but your words within this piece express a wonderful, precious and rare love, that needs few words to express such feelings...... Love.......
    It makes the world go round.

    Well penned.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    You did both express humor and love, mostly love. Good job. 5/5