Collide

by Faithless   Dec 11, 2008


Living in a different time zone
doesn't stop them from being apart
as they venture deeper into the unknown
unknowingly aware of what they've start

As moonlight shines through the night
the sun is scorching bright on the other side
taking love to an all new heights
as the two different worlds collide

physically separated apart
and being out of sight
pulls them closer to the heart
unfolding feelings that they've hide

thoughts of them being unite
just gets them excite
as the plane awaits to take flight
never have they felt so right

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  • 16 years ago

    by SweetGrief

    All of your poems are great, amazing,awesome, powerful etc...
    But this one I have to say is P E R F E C T
    it's about a far love in a diff zone times, I got ya... A love that is explained in a pure perfect way... You have the most wonderful poems that i've ever read in my life...
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Emily

    (: I relate. I'm in Asia... he's in the US

  • 16 years ago

    by Emily

    (: I relate. I'm in Asia... he's in the US

  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    Awesome write. Really relates to many people and i loved it.

    unknowingly aware of what they've have start
    ^^^^
    You have they've which stands for they have.. and then you have, have afterwards as well? maybe just change that.

    But apart from that, great love poem :)

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    This poem was filled with romance Every line was hypnotizing and charming. It was very beautiful. I love this line:
    "As the plane awaits to take flight
    never have they felt so right"

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