Tired

by iFallToPieces   Dec 25, 2008


When I hear your name,
My heart, it starts to break,
When I hear your name,
I think of my mistake.

I cant seem to forget you,
I cant seem to let you go,
You cant see that I love you,
With my heart and soul

The pain I feel,
Is far too real.
Not even a blade,
Will break this deal.

Im tired of this feeling,
Im tired of the pain,
Im tired of dealing,
With loving you again.

The blunted blade,
The red stained knife,
Who would have thought,
Love, could take ones life.

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  • 16 years ago

    by heartbrokengrl

    This one is pretty good i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by heartbrokengrl

    This one is pretty good i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    A really breath-taking poem... Too easy to relate...
    Some things are just so hard to let go...

    Beautiful write

    *keep up*
    isabel

  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow that was great dahl.
    Never cut to escape your pain.. now that you have found poetry, there is no need for the knife.
    I cant seem, to forget you,
    I cant seem, to let you go,
    ^^ im not sure if there should be a comma there.. i think it would be fine read as:
    I cant seem to let you go.

    Im tired of this feeling,
    Im tired of the pain,
    Im tired of dealing,
    With loving you again.

    ^^ Great stanza.
    Awesome work

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