That you're conroling my life. - controlling I think you meant in this area.
I don't know what of this is fiction and what of this is truth. It's a deep very emotional poem which comes from a part of you or a part of something you lived. I hope that all is well in your life.
The poem is well constructed, the fact that you did a repetitious are you happy now, really nailed home the point and was a very good factor which I use in a lot of mine, or used rather in the past tense.