The Ghost and the Human 1

by Nikkicola   Dec 30, 2008


Hey this just a little bit of a poem story that I'm writting it's chapter 1 and its called Lost Between Two Forbidden Worlds...Tell me if I should continue it :-)

She was sitting on her bed staring out her window..
Hugging all she had, some worn out pillow
It was then she saw him staring at his feet
Walking down the street

She let out a laugh threw her tears...
Was the curse lifted after all these years?
Locked up in her room, begging to be free...
There was a whole world she had yet seen

At that moment he glanced up and caught her eye
Her heart started beating rapidly, and she thought she would die
Never able to feel anything until that moment
Hiding behind curtains, living in tourment

She was a ghost, lost between two worlds yet to serve her purpose
He was a human, the only one who could see her?
What would either do, without the other...
It was forbidden for them to be together...

She longed for his hand upon her face, she wanted to feel...
Not like it mattered, her life was a dream, she wasn't even real
Trying to put it together something about her just didn't seem to fit...
He hadn't noticed how long he had stared at her until the street lamps lit

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  • 15 years ago

    by waiting for the unknown

    I like it. it flows really well :) one suggestion i have, is where is says in the first section: wore out, try saying worn out instead. it might sound better ^^ i'm really interested in this and i would love for you to continue.