I Love You

by iFallToPieces   Jan 3, 2009


If I tell you how I feel,
Will you tell me too?
If I tell you that I love you,
Will I hear I Love You Too?

Im sitting here wondering,
If you feel the same,
Wondering if you heart beat quickens,
Whenever you hear my name.

I sit and I ponder,
On the words you try and say,
I sit and I wonder,
If there was a simpler way.

For you to tell the truth,
For me to let you know,
For you to show me proof,
That you never let me go.

For I have always held on,
Though you are far away.
For I never let you go,
I just let my love stray.

So here I will ask again.
If I tell you how I feel,
Will you tell me too?
If I say that I Love You,
Will I hear I Love You Too?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Well i enjoyed this one for some reasons

    frist the flow is excelent and the usage of words are easy , and simple

    it si very easy to undertadn like the words are realy from the heart , simple talk from heart to heart that everyone understand .
    everyone can relate and ask the same questions can be asked
    great expression
    simplicity and short stanzas are a great strategy . 5 /5

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow im quite amazed.You have done a great job in transfering ur feeling into words not to mention the flow was also great.This poem was such a delightful to read...i'm sure whoever you wrote for would be delighted to hear ur confessions;)Keep it up