Double Exposure

I really liked this poem. It brought tears to my eyes. You grabbed my attention and kept it! (and thats saying alot) lol beautiful piece of work!!

"Life is like a photograph; you develop from the negatives."

The total amount of light allowed to fall on the medium is exposure
When we are focused on the negative it is hard to maintain composure

Our lord sees us, as we are, without images, and distorted fact

The light of truth may fall, but it will rise when developed well
I believe a double exposure is a useless picture in heaven, or in hell

I have deleted all my least favorite lines from the poem thus leaving the strongest ones, the ones i loved. The idea of contrasting life to a photograph is enlightening and refreshing. It is a good parallel to the way we live life. We develop from the negative (character building), double exposures useless ( people who straddle the line and stand for nothing. These metaphors are simply unique. I did not like the fact you had the words judge a book by its cover in the poem, and i felt that even though it is what you were trying to say i did not like the line about giving flowers. I sincerely wish those lines were changed. However you are the published one, not I. I loved it, and thank you for using your creativity. 5/5

Congrad's. That was beautiful.

Good work old old son, well done on your win

Cheerz Nicko

I have 2 agree wth Tasteless,as an opinion,u nailed it bro,but as a poem it simply didnt cut it.it felt like lines and rhymes were forced...even though i don't want 2,am forced 2 give it a 2/5