Half-Past Hearts

by ether   Jan 12, 2009


Spiked the sky and watch it turn black,
And it's true compassion is what I lack,
Been given these souls embroidered green,
Stitches sown tightly, they're barely seen.

Got these pictures for you in my mind,
Of all your favourites you left behind,
Food and places, does it feel better now?
You've changed yourself, I want to know how.

I was once told a shot of reality is all one needs,
But it's hard to find with palms sweaty from greed.
Show me the light you hide underneath your bed,
It's so much warmer there, away from your head.

Rested and recharged ready to ride another race,
Running out of ground with this unsteady pace.
Ran this blackened sky through my fingers so tight,
And you'd mistake this all for what happens at night.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    It's amazing...Girl YOU are an amazing young poetess..
    your poetry really deserves more than you're given on the site..alas some people are given more than they deserve..

    Anyway..such powerful lines..I loved the beginning of the poem and how you related it so much to the end..that was really great !

    "Show me the light you hide underneath your bed,
    It's so much warmer there, away from your head."

    Amazing lines..gotta say you keep impressing me each moment I run deeper in the poem.
    I loved your wording..it was professional, not just some words to rhyme..everything flowed really well..I can't find any flaws =)

    I'm starting to really like your poetry.
    Write on and keep on hitting me :]
    xx