persistently airy

by ether   Oct 2, 2017

persistently airy,
presently absent,
sleep walking body,
time traveling mind,
tidal emotions
riding the rings of saturn.

no warning before the storm surge
breaches the impermeable.

if you swear something cannot be done,
i’ll do it.
if you swear something cannot be broken,

the warning systems need to be upgraded;
we’re living in different times.


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  • 2 years ago

    by Emily Wacker

    Congratulations on the win! Well-deserved!

  • 2 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment

    The subject matter here can be interpreted in many
    ways and made to think about in many ways too. It talks
    about been with someone and been by their side through
    thick and thin yet within that situation there can be lots
    of problems as well. I like the way this poem has been
    presented and the flow of the read…well penned!

  • 2 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on your win this week. Milly x

  • 2 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Congratulations, ether

  • 2 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats on the win

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