Feel The Pain.

by Hologram   Feb 12, 2009


Sitting alone in the dark
I become someone else
I'm not the same at school
Right now, I'm myself.

I can hear the voices
I can feel the pain
I can see the blood
I've become insane.

The pain has taken over
As I try to take in a breath
The only breath I'm taking in
Is one more closer to death.

If they could see what I've seen
If they could feel what I've felt
Would they break instantly
From the pain I've been dealt???

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Just a thought;
Opinions appreciated :)

Renee
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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, this is really sad but very true in some peoples lifes. Well done, 5/5. Em

  • 14 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    My poor lil child ..
    Yu dnt need that shit.

  • 14 years ago

    by Fire Catches

    Good Job!
    Sometimes I just feel like that too
    I feel like i've been broken a thousand times and I'm the only one who can see and feel it!

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow. This was so much more then amazing.

    "The pain has taken over
    As I try to take in a breath
    The only breath I'm taking in
    Is one more closer to death."

    ^^ That was also my fav stanza. This poem really hits home for me, and im sure, so many others. It flows through so well and the emotions you poured into this have so much depth, theyre so powerful. Well done. 5/5 and added to my favs.

  • 15 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    "The pain has taken over
    As I try to take in a breath
    The only breath I'm taking in
    Is one more closer to death."
    - My favourite stanza
    Every second we get older, every moment we get closer to death, every breath we breath in is just one more instance where we are lying to ourselves and pretending to be something were not. A wonderful write.
    Keep it up xx

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