Missing her

This poem is really good and the rhyme was good and the flow was good as well as the imagery. This poem had really, really good emotion in it and I loved it. This poem really reminded me alot about how I feel.

Getting over someone is really hard. i have been thru it alot

i like the shortness of the poem and how it speaks to the truth. some lines u have to read in between the lines like

My wrist is isitchy

this line makes me believe tht u have cut and tht its bothering you now. cause u cut because of her but the last stanza

I hate this feeling,
I try to fight it,
I just want to live with out her

means u really do want to get over her.. from my experience cutting didnt help me get over someone.

good poem 5/5

Good poem, even though I'm not a fan of long poems, this was good. It did seem that you used "I" a lot in your poem. It felt repetitive. I would also like to see longer lines. Express how you feel and what you want to say.
Ah, punctuation. All I saw was periods. Add a comma or semi-colon here and there, and I'll be happy hunky dory.

Good poem overall, but it could use a little tweaking here and there.

Awwww excellent poem as always sweetie. What's the story behind this one?
Need to talk more, miss you xoxo