Could Have Saved A Dime A Year

by ether   Feb 22, 2009


Cherry Pie, why so down?
Turned your circles into frowns.
Sugar topped, baked to night.
Didn't turn out alright, alright.

Fork stabbed heart, cross roads,
Or no roads, faces show the load
Of hot water experiences, cold,
Rough and smooth like Cherry Pie Old.

Your life, made up of bad choices,
Personality faults and small voices
Speak to you through my ear walls.
But you don't care to listen anymore.

Now I feel a little bad that I cared,
About your experiences you never shared,
Except to me, could I have made it better?
A gamble you'd read: forever to never.

Stupid wretch, why so down?
Turned your wrongs into frowns,
Sour aftertaste and unforgiven flight,
Never was alright, alright.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Kaila

    This was awesome. I truly enjoyed this piece very much. The word choice was really amazing, and the different refrences were cool too. I did like the repitition you some how made it work for you. Most of the time I don't like it but in this case I did splendid job!
    5/5