by ADEL Feb 26, 2009
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
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My tongue will not drench |
by Rachel RTVW
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What a powerful piece. I agree with Lonely Rider, if everyone could feel the true meaning of those lines....I would have liked it better for structures sake if you had divided the pice into stanzas. None-the-less, it was superb! |
by Lonely Rider
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//but who am I to take |
by Cindy
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Adel |
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Adel, |
by Deana
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A very powerful message , if only we could all come to see how important peace really is. excellent write. |