The urge to destroy

I LOVE IT!!

Slash..
Wow I congratulate and thank you at the same time for having the guts to post and share this poem with us.
First of all I loved the flow..it went really well except for a stanza I will mention now.

My calloused hands wringing
Twisting, gripping then letting go
Not wanting to hurt you
Yet there is an urge to grab you by your neck

This was my fave stanza in the poem, even though I really loved it..the flow went a bit off here..But my love for it was above the flow hehe.

I thank you lord for the courage to withdraw
For giving me the control
For without it, all control would be lost
And my son would now be DEAD

Amazing end..I'm left speechless here..seriously dude you've impressed me with your closure and the feelings in this poem were intense.
One thing to say..I don't find the capitalizing of the last word is necessary...maybe it's just a point of view..cause I don't like capitalizing in poetry in general.

But hey :) that was a dark poem indeed.
You're really good at dark poems !
Write on.

Grant when I read your poems I often have one single thought. A thought that has yet to deceive me . And that thought is ..................
OH this is going to be GOOD!!!
I love your writing my friend and the diverse concept behind each one . Always a 5/5

Yeah don't we all get to that point with somebody

Amazingly written poem, lol i feel that way too... but not to my child (dont have one) but to people... wen im angry i can sooo relate to it...