Ironic isn't it? That when words fail music speaks
Each track takes on a new meaning of being unique
Playing those songs, hit repeat, they remind me of you
Giving myself wholly to you, my heart you shall accrue
Eyes staring into space, lyrics swimming in my head
So easy to feel this way, yet it's so hard to be said
Each love song listened to, reminding me only of you
Smiling, for we've got a whole lifetime to look forward to
Thinking that for once, maybe Cupid finally got it right
Dart doesn't taste poisoned, gazing at you; heart ignites
Wrapped in a secure embrace, let out a comforted sigh
With every passing day can feel my emotions intensify
Everything reminds me of you, jokes, words, every room
Blazing fire inside this heart, so passionately it consumes
Knowing that in your loving arms, everything will be okay
Your love like a summer leaf, it shines brighter every day
Two hearts melded together, hopefully to stay entwined
For this is something I've never felt before, so sublime
If this is puppy love, then I cant handle the real thing
Bathing in a sea of bliss, enjoying everything you bring
Ironic isn't it? That the same songs remind you of me
Curled up together, we're both flying in such ecstasy
Meant for one another, for together we can't go wrong
Instead of hitting repeat, let's make our own love song
Wow. I never thought of writing poem the way u just did. this is great. I felt the first 2 stanzas needed a little work but its great besides that. a little work as a coma in a different place or re word it a bit, but nice write..5/5
8 years ago
Excellent piece of poetry! I liked the flow, the emotions and the ending lines...but it doesn't mean that I didn't like the other lines...! Good job!
8 years ago
First off, I love the repetition of "Ironic isn't it?"it gave the poem a full loop, providing closure and yet it leaves it open to where you could continue the poem from his eyes.
Next, the "Two hearts melded together" threw me for a bit of a loop. I was half expecting this to be about someone who just got out of a relationship. I know I have those feelings when I hear some songs.
Finally, "when words fail music speaks" I completely understand this. Every time I turn on the radio it is as if the music knows my emotion. I see it a lot with country music.