Unintended {Contest}

by BREEawNUHH   Mar 9, 2009


Darling, don't fret; for I will be on my way soon,
I'm picking up the pieces of my life before you.
Wait for me to hop on the train that'll take me,
to the love I never expected, my unintended.

So much is shattered on her hardwood floor,
I left to retrieve it all for you, my unintended.
You won't get the fractured pieces of my past,
I'm putting them together so I can be whole.

Don't lose faith in me, just believe, my unintended,
that I will be by your side as soon as possible.
You won't get a portion; you'll get one-hundred percent,
but I need to glue the pieces of my past together.

The love I never expected, my unintended,
wait for me to hop on the train back to you.
I'm picking up the pieces of my life before you,
darling, don't fret; for I will be on my way soon.

Briana Coulter
03.09.09

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    This is really quite good.

    <Darling, don't fret; for I will be on my way soon,
    I'm picking up the pieces of my life before you.> I think these lines are my favorite. :) And I liked how at the end, you switched them around. :)

    Very well written! 5/5

    Bri~