Morning (Nove Otto)

"Petals kissed by dew, glistening,"
`Youve painted a very vivid image with such few words.. and isnt this ever gorgeous. I love how youve worded this, your word choice is flawless.. especically kissed, thats just absolutely breath-taking and gorgeously penned.

"Sunshine spreading warmth everywhere.
Flowers budding, blooming with flare."
`Your words bring warmth to the reader, and portray such vivid images.. great alliteration with "sunshine spreading" and "budding, blooming" so beautiful.. your words brought a smile to my face.. what a uplifting poem that speaks of a beautiful morning and the flowers blooming and glistening in the sun.. makes me think of spring and summer ;]

"As morning unfolds with suspense,
wonder fills my heart with delight,
and I know the world is alright.
Nature's beauty is so immense."
`Your last line is sooo powerful Sylvia! So very true, what a beautifully written poem.. I needed something uplifting to brighten my day and with such short words and vivid images of such nature I'm smiling. :]

Thanks for sharing.
Beautifully written, 5/5.

Outstanding write sylvia, awesome flow, great wording. 5/5

Sylvia..what a beautiful poem my dear =)
The opening line was very captivating and amazing.
I think I read about this form but I don't recall it is famous here on the site.
you did a wonderful job dear.
To tell the truth I never really enjoy a poem about nature, yea I know it's weird, I just don't find immense emotions in it..but this one.. you left me breathless =)

I have no criticism !
Write one.

Lovely write Sylvia...
you ahve captured the beauty of nature so well... the imagery is so refreshing ... loved it...

keep writing :)

What a stunning nature poem. Its a feel good poem.. about one of the greatest things in the world. You really brought a smile to my face, such intense imagery you used!

Petals kissed by dew, glistening,
^^
Your opening line is beautiful. I have never heard that before, so congratulations on being totally unique. Petals kissed by dew. That is simply stunnig wording.

A really beautiful write Sylvia.
5/5