Birds. (Double Haiku)

I haven't read a haiku in a while, this was refreshing and exactly described birds. You are so amazing at writing nature poems, you never fail to take my breath away! Great wording, flawless in my opinion. Birds are such lovely creatures, especially when they sing their songs.

5/5 from me, take care and keep writing!

~MaryAnne

A beautiful write.Recently visited a national park,the memory of the dazzling coloured birds perching on the tree was revived.
What a feel! Great.Keep it up.God bless.

Spring, I cannot wait and your words make me want it to be here NOW. I love to watch for the Robins and other birds at the beginning of the season. Good write. 5/5

Birds chirping softly
perched upon firm tree branches
absorbing spring breeze

^^^
What a better way to mark the arrival of Spring that with the sweet chirp of birds. Pure reminders that Spring has arrived and Summer is around the bend.

I like how you used "firm" in the second line. Spring is a time for new growth sturdy and strong. Great word !

Radiant beauty
dazzles through vibrant colors
head held high with pride
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Beautiful imagery created !

A wonderfully penned Double Haiku and a joy to read.

Thanks for sharing
Luanne

Beautiful double Haiku Tempsy:)

I love the words you used..such sweetness and softness portrayed here:)

A gem, sweet girl:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid