On the edge of Arrogance

by Daisy if you do   Mar 19, 2009


Desperation, pondering
on peaks of pain.
Oceans of Why's
filled with jealous despair.
Mountains of arrogance.
I'd respond with wit
but I've lost all stamina.
Sighing, I seize my fear
convulsions.
Pangs of embarrassment
sting my face.
Plateaus of envious egos.
Valleys of sad despair.

All is cold

*** Thank you Anna for all your help, I really appreciate you helping me with the format.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    Such an interesting piece. I see hurt and anger. I see the questions, and lost horizons. Yes, there is pain, and the insults we all fear to face. How many of us have been there? How many fear to move on? How many are trong enough to put it in a so permanent form of the written word? Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    A short but strong write Kay I really enjoyed it, very nice work.

    The title captured me, I love your opening, ending and everything in between, great job!

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    This is wonderful Kay, sad but real. I love the style of the poem. It added to the whole feel of the poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Mushh

    5/5
    this is amazing.
    xxx

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Though this is a short piece, I can feel the sad emotions running through this poem. I like how you used nature(ocean, mountain etc) to help enhance your poem. I think it really worked well here.It was certainly delightful to read.

    Excellent Job
    5/5

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