Stealing Spring's Spotlight.

by Courageous Dreamer   Mar 21, 2009


Chunks of snow dwindle,
stealing away spring's spotlight,
frosting once bare ground.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "Chunks of snow dwindle,"

    This caught my eye, your word usage here is very graphic and describes so much.

    "stealing away spring's spotlight,"

    This was brilliantly written, your creativity and imagination shined throughout this haiku.

    "frosting once bare ground."

    One of my favorites, I love what you said here, what a point that I never thought about.

    5/5 from me, take care.

    ~MaryAnne

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Lovely write...
    even the stealing has a beauty :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Lovely write...
    even the stealing has a beauty :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Thank goodness the snow is gone, except we are having "snow showers" today. I am ready for Spring. New grass, flowers, birds out, everything renewed. Good job on this. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Beautiful choice of words, Tempsy:)
    A lovely Haiku indeed.
    Spring will be here any day now!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

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