On The Edge

Now this is intelligent poetry, you really played beautifully with the words. Deep indeed.

all the best and take care

The word of choice that you used here was great. The poem was beautifully crafted with only a few words which i think it's extraordinary.It really puts you on the edge between sanity and madness.

Excellent Job
5/5

Beautiful write Sylvia...

"Tenuous position,
held in place
by a single thread
of desperation."

^^ very deep lines ... sometimes life shows such phases when we feel we are on the edge ... desparately trying to put everything in place... beautifully penned...

"Neither choice
appealing.
Sanity or madness."

^^ I loved these lines ... very powerful and hard-hitting reality...

Sylvia
Very dark piece you have penned.

Tenuous position,
held in place
by a single thread
of desperation.

Sometimes we are only holding on by that little thread. If you look hard enough you will see a shining light that makes you keep on fighting.

Neither choice
appealing.
Sanity or madness

This is so sad. When the Sanity is as dismal as the madness :(
Great job!
((HUGS))

Deep and thought provoking Silvia..
I do not believe in labels..I think all people have a little madness in them in one way or the other and that there is a balance there between sanity and insanity and that certain events ( loss of someone dear, a job an ilness, accident, medicines,drugs, etc) can throw a person off balance. Either temporary or forgood.

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid