Living Angel

by Tyler   Jun 12, 2004


Dad what are you doing?
Sis, are you alright?
Stop it please.
Shes too little to fight.
Stop it! why are you hurting her?
Please, No more.
I promise it will be like it was before.
I promise she will not tell.
Please stop it daddy.

~Shut up or you'll go to hell
I had just about enough son,
Stop whining, Shut the F*ck up.~

Please Daddy I'm sorry,
Just leave her alone.

~You should have listened Boy...
But I should have known.~

No!! stop dad!
Stop hitting me...
What did I do?
Stop! Let me be...

~I told you to leave,
What do i have to do to make you see?
Now just stay still...~

***

And now I watch over you...
My sister... My friend.
It was the least i could do.
Stop your life from facing the end.

If only i could do more.
But sadly i paid my price.
If only i knew the pain you had in store.
Maybe you would live a different life.

But as of right now, you still breath.
And you still survive.
Regardless of the way you leave.
Right now your still alive.

Note: This is not about me... its about a good friend of mine... the part at the end is him looking down upon his sister from above... and yes his dad is in jail...

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  • 19 years ago

    by dandy

    This is an amazing poem to say the least. You have such a knack for writing, im so envious!!! Great job and keep writing. Your deffinatley going on my favorites list! That's so horrible about your friend.......:-(

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    oh wow... this is terribly sad...

    but so well written... the conversation at the beginning was a great way to set it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by XJulesX

    great job, it really touched me. *clap clap clap..*

  • 19 years ago

    by Tyler

    no peopel this wasnt about me... about my friend... and i guess not alot of people caught onto the idea behind it.... he died... and his dad is in jail.... he sacraficed himself to save his sister...

  • 19 years ago

    by Carrie

    Hey Tyler,
    Wow that is a very touching poem! I love alot of your poems! You put alot of emotion in them and not many people do! Your sister must be very lucky to have a brother like you! You are truly one in a million! My brother would do ne thing for me too! He would take a bullet in a second for me if it meant life or death! I just wanted to let you know that you have an amazing talent and hope you don't even forget that! Well, I hope to read more and all! Keep them on coming!!! Lots Of Love!

    -Carrie-

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