Their Final Words

by Nikkicola   Apr 24, 2009


You see this is an all new fairytale, referring to it's never too late
you asked me what happened and I said to wait.....
I took it to my grave, the story of a love that couldn't be broken
And hidden within the words that were obvious yet never spoken

Here goes the story of two broken souls and one life time
The best of friends, still however hiding the truth with a lie
The girl keeping a secret locked deep within her own heart
Little did she know the boy was keeping the same one, tearing him apart

Always together, everyone would always say
No use to tell them they'll figure it out one day
What wasn't obvious to themselves
Was obvious to everyone else

That girl would lay on the ground staring at the sky
Consumed with thoughts of him, and she didn't know why
Taking flowers, counting the petals....he loves me, he loves me not...
Praying for him, but she realized that was more then a lot.....

That boy never knew what to say
Getting more and more tongue tied everyday
All he ever really wanted was her
But was afraid to not have there before

Who knew loving someone could make things so awkward
To afraid to lose what they had, they never moved forward
Neither could sleep at night, for reality was better then a dream
They waited till the end of forever, or maybe thats just how it seemed

She could never love me.....this feeling couldn't go both ways, he thought
Little did he know that his smile and embrace is all she dreamed about
He could never love me, she'd so Naively say
But he loved her more with each passing day

Years went by each left their home town, still staying in touch
Two best friends tied at the heart by a harmless highschool crush
Every weekend they met up at that old coffee shop
Knowing it was easier to face love then to try to stop.....

One weekend the girl decided not to go
Work that week had been slow
That boy lost interest, knowing it would never be
If they would of opened there eyes...who knows what each would of been able to see

Many more years passed, the girl's dream became real, now a poet and no less a writer
She decided hands down, how things worked out 5 years before was better
She says she no longer loves him, little did she know in everything she wrote
Clues of him lingered, his smile, his eyes, his love, and every word he spoke

That boy later became the singer of a famous band
Still carrying the memories of her in the palm of his hand
He had it all, and anyone he wanted, but he still wanted her
He hated himself for not seeing if they could of been more....

A girl lying upon cold tile looking for inspiration, that could fix her broken heart
A boy lying upon a bed, knowing one wrong move could rip his heart apart
The girl knows it's worth the risk, she still loved him after all those years
The boy gets up knowing it's finally time to face what he'd always feared

A car speeding to that girls road
A car speeding toward the boys road
Two cars crash halfway
Only love destroying another perfect day

Two bodies found laying on the blacktop all alone
Hand in hand finally to find their true home
And what they said in there final moments one will forever guess
Maybe they said it all, maybe nothing but a final kiss

And me I somehow always knew
Their last words where I love you

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  • 14 years ago

    by Annaam

    Omg... I am in LOve with it. The end is sO sad and yet sO beautiful...!

    ``You see this is an all new fairytale, referring to it's never to late
    --> It's never 'too' late

    ``What wasn't obvious to there selves
    --> 'TheMselves'

    ``But was afraid to not have there before
    --> I dOnt really understand this One.. :|

    ``Who knew loving someone could make things so awkward
    To afraid to lose what they had, they never moved forward
    Neither could sleep at night, for reality was better then a dream
    They waited till the end of forever, or maybe thats just how it seemed
    --> I just LOVE this One! :)

    ``Years went by each left there home town, still staying in touch
    --> .. each left 'theIR' hometown..

    ``Many more years passed, the girls dream became real, now a poet and no less a writer
    She decided hands down, how things worked out 5 years before was better
    She says she no longer loves him, little did she know in everything she wrote
    Clues of him lingered, his smile, his eyes, his love, and every word he spoke
    --> 1st line: '.. the girl's...'
    LOve the last 2 lines!

    ``He hated his self for not seeing if they could of been more....
    --> Hated 'hIMself' .. cOuld 'have'...

    ``Two bodies found laying on the blacktop all alone
    Hand in hand finally to find there true home
    And what they said in there final moments one will forever guess
    Maybe they said it all, maybe nothing but a final kiss
    --> 2nd line: ..to find 'theIR' true..
    3rd line: ..in theIR final...

    ``And me I somehow always knew
    There last words where I love you
    --> DO yOu think it' wOuld sOund better with 'As fOr me, I sOmehOw always knew' ?
    Last line: TheIR.

    SOrry fOr making it sO lOng, but cOrrecting those little errOrs will make it perfect!
    Excellent Write! :)

    5/5 :).