A Message to Eva and Adam

by Boy   Apr 27, 2009


Once upon a time when the world was so calm
Adam and Eva were enjoying the charms
They never wonder about the flaws
And what was going to start?

Babies were being born on day and night
They result was going for fight
They never wonder about the flaws
And what was going to start?

Now the Billions of people in this world
World with hundreds countries
Countries with hundred borders
Borders with thousands soldiers
Soldier with different uniform

O Eva!
Your children are fighting with each other
and lost their humanity in wars
they are bathing in each other blood
to occupy the land where you stayed
in the shadow of ignorance

O Adam!
The ignorance killed their innocence
The power killed their justice
The wealth killed their pityness
Very few remains with politeness
now the world become battle field

O Eva and Adam!
sadness filled my heart to say that
This is the present of your children!!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Mandrake13

    Both true and sad you watch movies about war and the only thing it is is just one person who prays to GOD for strength to live through the war so he can be with his family again and then the next day he goes and kills someone who made the same prayer he did

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow tia is very true and very very good :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I know Im late in commenting, but let me tell u,
    the idea is AMAZING:) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Pityness is a rare spelling if in fact it is in the english dictionary

    My eyes collide head-on with stuffed graveyards
    False gods, I scuff
    At pettiness which plays so rough
    Walk upside-down inside handcuffs
    Kick my legs to crash it off
    Say okay, I have had enough
    What else can you show me?

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A Message to Eva and Adam
    by Alone

    Once upon a time when the world was so calm
    Adam and Eva were enjoying the charms
    They never wonder about the flaws
    And what was going to start?

    Babies were being born on day and night
    The result was heading for fight
    They never wondered about the flaws
    And what was going to start?

    Now the Billions of people in this world
    world with hundreds countries.
    Countries with hundred borders.
    Borders with thousands soldiers.
    Soldiers with different uniforms

    O Eva!
    Your children are fighting with each other
    and lost their humanity in wars
    they are bathing in each others blood
    to occupy the land where you stayed
    in the shadow of ignorance

    O Adam!
    The ignorance killed their innocence
    The power killed their justice
    The wealth killed their pettiness
    Very few remains with politeness
    now the world become battle field

    O Eva and Adam!
    sadness filled my heart to say that
    This is the present of your children!!