Looking back

by Kelsie Danielle   Jun 6, 2009


I realized looking back
Doesn't give you slack
But some people need the past
So they won't go to fast
The girl who remembered
She went back to December
She had a strange feeling
She was on the ceiling
She couldn't look
She was on a hook
She needed air
But no one cared
Then she came back
She did not have slack
But she needed the past
So she won't go to fast

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  • 14 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Very well written,this poem of yours shows how you've improved since your last posts..

    keep going...the path isnt that long to walk through ^^,

    peace~

  • 14 years ago

    by Olivia Leugh

    Its good keep working at it